Showcase - June 12-18, 2017

[Feel]

 

[JC.A]

Eyy Feel, your track feels smooth and calm and that's a good thing. I think needs some of those "DJ scratching" efx on the vocals just to add variation, IMO. :biggrin:

 

[TeeJay Sounds]

:up2:Heyy guys, newbie here, would love hear your feedback on this first song that I produced with Bach-A.
Thanks.

I appreciate your feedback man, thanks. That's a really good track for your first man loving the brassy sounds, keep it up dude!

 

[JC.A]

I appreciate your feedback man, thanks. That's a really good track for your first man loving the brassy sounds, keep it up dude!

Thanks TeeJay :biggrin::up2:

 

[SandmanP]

@Feel This was a good one I like it... some of the instruments were a lil repetitive like the ride i think but other than that the variation in pattern was good. good job keep working on your sound.

 

[SandmanP]

:up2:Heyy guys, newbie here, would love hear your feedback on this first song that I produced with Bach-A.
Thanks.

@JC.A not bad its got that classic east coast boom-pap, i would work on the dynamics of the track its a lil hot, not a real big fan of the vocal but its a good first track

 

[SandmanP]

im set this right here ill be back in a few...


There are alot of good track up here this week, I like that people are really giving good feedback.. ill be back to review more just want to post this first

 

[Drago Zetić]

@SandmanP Interesting drum pattern, I like the originality because it compensates for the plain sounding 808s. Perhaps the rest could be a little louder after the buildups.

 

[DJ Monstar]

 

[JC.A]

@JC.A not bad its got that classic east coast boom-pap, i would work on the dynamics of the track its a lil hot, not a real big fan of the vocal but its a good first track

Hi SandmanP, thanks for your feedback man, because of the feedbacks I've been receiving, now I know where my production skill is at hehe. Your advices will be noted. :biggrin:

 

[EsquireMusic111]

Here is my latest!!!!

 

[JC.A]

im set this right here ill be back in a few...


There are alot of good track up here this week, I like that people are really giving good feedback.. ill be back to review more just want to post this first

Your track's clean and good man, I guess I got nothing to say anymore hehe. :biggrin::up2:

 

[EsquireMusic111]

im set this right here ill be back in a few...


There are alot of good track up here this week, I like that people are really giving good feedback.. ill be back to review more just want to post this first

That drum pattern is definitely something different!!! Great experimentation!

 

[JC.A]

Here is my latest!!!!

Sounds professional for me atleast. Liking the hard kicks and how percs are panned. :biggrin:

Great track man, everything's cool, calm. But IMO, the open hats gets a bit repetitive. Maybe change the velocity so it adds a bit of variation. Nonetheless, still a cool track.:biggrin::up2:

Getting a bouncy vibe on that "Where I Go" track. :biggrin::up2:Liked it pretty much, except for the "In the Air Tonight" slow version, idk but listening to it makes me dizzy haha.

Let's hope this Showcase gets more activity than the last one. That one beat I couldn't get to export was meant for this thread, but I made something else in the meantime.

Nothing here yet.

@tomkillsjerry
The three note bassline on "Where I Go" seems out of place. It's not exactly off-key, but I don't really like it. The synth part is cool, nice ambiental vibe on this one.

I don't really get the point behind the other one - I could do that using VLC in less than four mouse clicks. It sounds pretty artifacted too.

At start, pretty good jazz hiphop track, but listening to it after 1 minute or 2, I feel an ear fatigue coming.

 

[Drago Zetić]

Thanks a lot, @tomkillsjerry and @JC.A - I'll try to add another kick sound for the quieter hits, ease down on the overdriven synth, lower the bass volume and change the points in which the phaser is active.

@EsquireMusic111 That kick is really offensive to my ears. The panning and volume are extreme in an unpleasant. The intro is interesting, those random sounding effects remind me of some lobit stuff I used to listen to.

 

[SandmanP]

Here is my latest!!!!

@EsquireMusic111 Yo I like this alot this a dope track, I like the vibe of it. That sample is dope to I like how you flipped it and added your style to it... I noticed the panning of the kick and snare towards the end of the track, nice way to keep it interesting.. kick and snare are a lil to punchy for me, but other than that man this is a solid track.... good job bro! Cant wait to see what you got next.

 

[wizard]

@JC.A nice work the video one vocals need work on but good work

the Soundcloud track DOPE
Great advices from @Drago Zetić

 

[DJ Monstar]

 

[JC.A]

@JC.A nice work the video one vocals need work on but good work

the Soundcloud track DOPE
Great advices from @Drago Zetić

Thanks Wizard :biggrin::up2:

 

[DJ Monstar]