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Showcase - January 11-17, 2016

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ColeSllaw

ColeSllaw

ColeSllaw
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@Dnz The Mnc super mellow vibe here its dope. I think its a pretty unique track. Maybe a little more cut on the snare to really make it pop. but overall i love it
@Marc Duncan that wasn't what i was expecting when i heard the intro, but you freaked that shit good work on this track i dig it.
Hope you like my latest:
 
Marc Duncan

Marc Duncan

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ColeSllaw said:
@Dnz The Mnc super mellow vibe here its dope. I think its a pretty unique track. Maybe a little more cut on the snare to really make it pop. but overall i love it
@Marc Duncan that wasn't what i was expecting when i heard the intro, but you freaked that shit good work on this track i dig it.
Hope you like my latest:
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It sounds simple, which makes it perfect; excellent job.
 
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Bohni

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@Marc Duncan I like the vibe, but the parts at around 2:00 (came once before), i feel like the bass could be stronger (or bass kick, synth, just the lower freqs). It doesn't hit that hard like I feel it should.

@ColeSllaw The kick at 1:33 is just nasty (in a good way xD). I feel like you could have played a bit more with the volume of the "hey"-samples. The were introduced, but never really present.

@Dnz The Mnc I don't have much to say on this one. I find the snare a little bit weak, but that is my taste...

 
Marc Duncan

Marc Duncan

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Bohni said:
@Marc Duncan I like the vibe, but the parts at around 2:00 (came once before), i feel like the bass could be stronger (or bass kick, synth, just the lower freqs). It doesn't hit that hard like I feel it should.

@ColeSllaw The kick at 1:33 is just nasty (in a good way xD). I feel like you could have played a bit more with the volume of the "hey"-samples. The were introduced, but never really present.

@Dnz The Mnc I don't have much to say on this one. I find the snare a little bit weak, but that is my taste...

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1. Can only get better, not worse.
2. Beat sounds sinister, like a supervillain type beat, really sick man, great job.

Dnz The Mnc said:
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Asian influence? Really mellow.
 
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ColeSllaw

ColeSllaw

ColeSllaw
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@Bohni This is pretty cool sounding. Maybe a little less snare at the beginning, it sorta makes it move too fast for me. Overall its pretty dope. Theres a lot going on in it but its well balanced.
Here's this, hope you enjoy:
 
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@WalkerGodsKid

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@Kozyr that sample was perfect with the drums. just interested to see what you wouldve done if the song was longer.

@tomkillsjerry feel like your extra meticulous with your drums and it makes this beat sound dope.

 
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Frontman Willy

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aotb!
ColeSllaw said:
@Bohni This is pretty cool sounding. Maybe a little less snare at the beginning, it sorta makes it move too fast for me. Overall its pretty dope. Theres a lot going on in it but its well balanced.
Here's this, hope you enjoy:
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@Marc Duncan - Pretty Dope man, Keep it up, Asian samples are dope
@ColeSllaw - Christmas carol 2016 :D joke, very nice :)
@tomkillsjerry - good work man, im your fan, i love this beat,

Ok, my latest:)

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Drum placement is spot on digging that nasty snare.

Kohie said:


Haven't touched the beats in a minute. Finally got around to finishing this one up. Lemme know what y'all think.

Going to drop feed in another post tomorrow.
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This is slick! love the chill tempo. Its got a good groove.

Interested to hear feed back on some of my music. Thanks yall!
 
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Koey

Koey

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Appreciate the feedback so far. Here goes my feed:

@Marc Duncan - I think there's too many melodic instruments going to work at the same time. They clash too much for me. Mix is clean tho.

@ColeSllaw - Mix is nice. Real simple type of beat but it gives the MC a lot of room to work. Digging the eerie vibe.

@Bohni - Drums slap hard. I think the main snare on the 2 and 4 count should have some more distinction with the snare you're using for the drumroll.

@tomkillsjerry - This is dope. Really digging the vibe. Instrumentation is on point. Prob the best I've heard in this showcase so far. Good shit.

@Kozyr - Drums are nice man. Sample work is cool too. I like the effects you threw on them. I think the bassline could be brought up some more to give the track some more drive.

@@WalkerGodsKid - Mix sounds kinda muddy. All the elements sound like they're trying to compete with each other. Kind of hard to follow what's going on with this beat.

@Frontman Willy - I feel like there's some more room for the drums to come up in the mix. Beat is cool tho. Mix sounds clean.
 
Marc Duncan

Marc Duncan

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Kohie said:
Appreciate the feedback so far. Here goes my feed:

@Marc Duncan - I think there's too many melodic instruments going to work at the same time. They clash too much for me. Mix is clean tho.

@ColeSllaw - Mix is nice. Real simple type of beat but it gives the MC a lot of room to work. Digging the eerie vibe.

@Bohni - Drums slap hard. I think the main snare on the 2 and 4 count should have some more distinction with the snare you're using for the drumroll.

@tomkillsjerry - This is dope. Really digging the vibe. Instrumentation is on point. Prob the best I've heard in this showcase so far. Good shit.

@Kozyr - Drums are nice man. Sample work is cool too. I like the effects you threw on them. I think the bassline could be brought up some more to give the track some more drive.

@@WalkerGodsKid - Mix sounds kinda muddy. All the elements sound like they're trying to compete with each other. Kind of hard to follow what's going on with this beat.

@Frontman Willy - I feel like there's some more room for the drums to come up in the mix. Beat is cool tho. Mix sounds clean.
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Was trying something new, guess it won't work for everybody.
 
ColeSllaw

ColeSllaw

ColeSllaw
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@walkergodskid you definitely had the vision, but i think a big factor with this beat is making all those sounds coexist, could be improved but still pretty good
@Kozyr this is pretty dope, the baseline is a little low but some people don't like overpowering bass so do you. Good work
I've been trying to improve on my music writing skills, tell me what you think everyone
 
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