Showcase - January 11-17, 2016
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Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
ColeSllaw
ColeSllaw
Battle Points: 17
@Dnz The Mnc super mellow vibe here its dope. I think its a pretty unique track. Maybe a little more cut on the snare to really make it pop. but overall i love it
@Marc Duncan that wasn't what i was expecting when i heard the intro, but you freaked that shit good work on this track i dig it.
Hope you like my latest:
@Marc Duncan that wasn't what i was expecting when i heard the intro, but you freaked that shit good work on this track i dig it.
Hope you like my latest:
Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
It sounds simple, which makes it perfect; excellent job.
@Marc Duncan I like the vibe, but the parts at around 2:00 (came once before), i feel like the bass could be stronger (or bass kick, synth, just the lower freqs). It doesn't hit that hard like I feel it should.
@ColeSllaw The kick at 1:33 is just nasty (in a good way xD). I feel like you could have played a bit more with the volume of the "hey"-samples. The were introduced, but never really present.
@Dnz The Mnc I don't have much to say on this one. I find the snare a little bit weak, but that is my taste...
@ColeSllaw The kick at 1:33 is just nasty (in a good way xD). I feel like you could have played a bit more with the volume of the "hey"-samples. The were introduced, but never really present.
@Dnz The Mnc I don't have much to say on this one. I find the snare a little bit weak, but that is my taste...
Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
1. Can only get better, not worse.
2. Beat sounds sinister, like a supervillain type beat, really sick man, great job.
Asian influence? Really mellow.
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tomkillsjerry
ILLIEN
@Dnz The Mnc dig that asian pluck nice use of space really dope i dea
@Marc Duncan dig this nice flow drums bang nice work
@Bohni i like it but i feel like it could use a break goin in 100% the time with out letting it chill gets exhausting to listen to
@ColeSllaw really dope not a thing i would change nice work!
heres something i made last night
@Marc Duncan dig this nice flow drums bang nice work
@Bohni i like it but i feel like it could use a break goin in 100% the time with out letting it chill gets exhausting to listen to
@ColeSllaw really dope not a thing i would change nice work!
heres something i made last night
Kozyr
Newbie
@Marc Duncan - Pretty Dope man, Keep it up, Asian samples are dope
@ColeSllaw - Christmas carol 2016
joke, very nice
@tomkillsjerry - good work man, im your fan, i love this beat,
Ok, my latest
@ColeSllaw - Christmas carol 2016
joke, very nice @tomkillsjerry - good work man, im your fan, i love this beat,
Ok, my latest
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@WalkerGodsKid
Guest
@Kozyr that sample was perfect with the drums. just interested to see what you wouldve done if the song was longer.
@tomkillsjerry feel like your extra meticulous with your drums and it makes this beat sound dope.
@tomkillsjerry feel like your extra meticulous with your drums and it makes this beat sound dope.
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Frontman Willy
Member
Battle Points: 9
@Marc Duncan - Pretty Dope man, Keep it up, Asian samples are dope
@ColeSllaw - Christmas carol 2016
@tomkillsjerry - good work man, im your fan, i love this beat,
Ok, my latest
Drum placement is spot on digging that nasty snare.
This is slick! love the chill tempo. Its got a good groove.
Interested to hear feed back on some of my music. Thanks yall!
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Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
@Marc Duncan - Pretty Dope man, Keep it up, Asian samples are dope
@ColeSllaw - Christmas carol 2016
@tomkillsjerry - good work man, im your fan, i love this beat,
Ok, my latest
The horns are really sick, awesome.
Koey
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 24
Appreciate the feedback so far. Here goes my feed:
@Marc Duncan - I think there's too many melodic instruments going to work at the same time. They clash too much for me. Mix is clean tho.
@ColeSllaw - Mix is nice. Real simple type of beat but it gives the MC a lot of room to work. Digging the eerie vibe.
@Bohni - Drums slap hard. I think the main snare on the 2 and 4 count should have some more distinction with the snare you're using for the drumroll.
@tomkillsjerry - This is dope. Really digging the vibe. Instrumentation is on point. Prob the best I've heard in this showcase so far. Good shit.
@Kozyr - Drums are nice man. Sample work is cool too. I like the effects you threw on them. I think the bassline could be brought up some more to give the track some more drive.
@@WalkerGodsKid - Mix sounds kinda muddy. All the elements sound like they're trying to compete with each other. Kind of hard to follow what's going on with this beat.
@Frontman Willy - I feel like there's some more room for the drums to come up in the mix. Beat is cool tho. Mix sounds clean.
@Marc Duncan - I think there's too many melodic instruments going to work at the same time. They clash too much for me. Mix is clean tho.
@ColeSllaw - Mix is nice. Real simple type of beat but it gives the MC a lot of room to work. Digging the eerie vibe.
@Bohni - Drums slap hard. I think the main snare on the 2 and 4 count should have some more distinction with the snare you're using for the drumroll.
@tomkillsjerry - This is dope. Really digging the vibe. Instrumentation is on point. Prob the best I've heard in this showcase so far. Good shit.
@Kozyr - Drums are nice man. Sample work is cool too. I like the effects you threw on them. I think the bassline could be brought up some more to give the track some more drive.
@@WalkerGodsKid - Mix sounds kinda muddy. All the elements sound like they're trying to compete with each other. Kind of hard to follow what's going on with this beat.
@Frontman Willy - I feel like there's some more room for the drums to come up in the mix. Beat is cool tho. Mix sounds clean.
Marc Duncan
The Black Man
Battle Points: 3
Was trying something new, guess it won't work for everybody.
ColeSllaw
ColeSllaw
Battle Points: 17
@walkergodskid you definitely had the vision, but i think a big factor with this beat is making all those sounds coexist, could be improved but still pretty good
@Kozyr this is pretty dope, the baseline is a little low but some people don't like overpowering bass so do you. Good work
I've been trying to improve on my music writing skills, tell me what you think everyone
@Kozyr this is pretty dope, the baseline is a little low but some people don't like overpowering bass so do you. Good work
I've been trying to improve on my music writing skills, tell me what you think everyone
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