TjombaBeats
Mister Miyagi Beats
I think i nailed it pretty much. But maybe the drums a bit too hard but it does sound.
Nothing here yet.
Thanks guys for your time and ears. Tell me what you think tho.Check this Beat yoo.
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Very wild beat. 
There are a lot of things going on. Sounds like something that could be used in some cyberpunk theme game or movie. Interesting drums (maybe a little bit too loud as you mentioned), interesting choice of sounds and although the beat itself is quite crazy and chaotic the structure of it the arrangement you did is good in my opinion. The only thing I would improve is when those, let's call it, "real" drum pattern comes in at around 0:24 is that I would make it less abrupt. Because you know, I was listening to it and I was like: "Alright, nice intro, detuned melody and great hihat. Okey, now some drums come in" and suddenly BOOM! that main drum pattern appeared and it was quite a blow for my eardrums. 
And that means something if I say that something is too abrupt or too loud.
There are a lot of things going on. Sounds like something that could be used in some cyberpunk theme game or movie. Interesting drums (maybe a little bit too loud as you mentioned), interesting choice of sounds and although the beat itself is quite crazy and chaotic the structure of it the arrangement you did is good in my opinion. The only thing I would improve is when those, let's call it, "real" drum pattern comes in at around 0:24 is that I would make it less abrupt. Because you know, I was listening to it and I was like: "Alright, nice intro, detuned melody and great hihat. Okey, now some drums come in" and suddenly BOOM! that main drum pattern appeared and it was quite a blow for my eardrums. And that means something if I say that something is too abrupt or too loud. 
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
Busy beat! Some creative sounds here. I personally think some of the heavier sounds that come in are a little too loud and could sit back a couple of db’s.
Nice.
Nice.
JustIn Flow
ILLIEN
Yes, it does have something. But I think that's a bit too much on it and to wild to rap about. I think here, less is more.
MichaelsLife
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I like this one. Not sure if it's made for a vocal artist to use though. If so, I would say the outro is the best part cause it leaves room for the artist. The mix is off in terms of the drums because sometimes it sounds like it's just a drum sample and other times it sounds like there are supporting elements that are louder than the sample. Other than that it's a solid track!
TjombaBeats
Mister Miyagi Beats
Thank you for your opinion yeah sometimes its hard to control the beat when your sitting at it all day long. Some breaks would help
TjombaBeats
Mister Miyagi Beats
Thank you
Damn yeah the drums are layered and all i know not very mixed anyway
Yes in music it is.. I might overdone it a bit but thank you for your reaction