alright, REVIEW TIME!!!!
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Artistix: let's see, i think it's too chaotic. there is just a lot of really fast movement going on and i think it's too much to keep up with all of it. i think you've got some really good ideas in there and i really like some the chops. like, the part at 1:30 and 1:43. i'm really diggin that. i think a different bass choice would be better too. all in all it's got some good stuff i like, but it just feels way too rushed.
Knoxraw: i don't think the bass line fits with the chops. the pitch sounds off. the chops aren't bad, but the bass just throws it all off. and it feels so empty. i know you said you threw it together real quick, but it needs more. it's just too empty.
Grafik: i think your chops are good, but some of the time they don't go together. you've got the 2 layered slices but they just don't mesh well pitch wise. sometimes they fit very nicely like between 40-47 seconds. that sounds real nice. i think part of it might be the bass too. i think the pitch on the bass might need some tweaking. i know i had a lot of problems getting pitches to match myself, that's why this flip took me longer. i think it's just the underlying parts you have going with the melody. the pitches don't match up with that of the melody, i think. but some parts sound great. the percussion works, but i'd layer some more sounds. try layering like, 2 kicks and 2 snares for some added depth and punch and shit like that.
Kev31: ok, not really feelin the percussion. the arrangement is fine, but not the sound choices. that snare mainly, i would definitely change that. i think the chops are good, but don't drop them out so much. it's the only real substance to the beat. your chop arrangement is good, but the beat just feels so empty. you need some more layering of slices. or add your own part underneath it.
Emeezy: at first those strings feel very rushed. the chop arrangement is good, but it felt real fast when i first listened. the percussion is good, and the bass is ok. adds a little depth which is nice. now that i've listened through a few times i've gotten used to the speed of the strings so it doesn't feel as rushed. alright, i just turned this shit way up and now i'm feelin it. because you didn't mix it and all the levels are kinda low when i really turn it up it sounds much better, especially now that i'm used to the strings. solid piece, those chops are really bangin now. good one.
2Good : aight this is nice and full which i like. i'd choose a different snare, or raise the pitch. give something a little sharper. i think the bass fits ok. what you've written for the bass fits, it's just a matter of sound choice. although, it seems fine. those chops are nice. i'm really feelin this. nice job on this.
Slik da Relic : ok, i like the chops. the bass line is good, and the percussion is ill. this is a real nice flip. i really don't have much to say. it's sick. i'm really feelin this. keep it up.
Ruimixx: not really feelin the percussion. especially that stutter thing. it just sounds off. the chops are ok, but don't always seem to fit with the bassline and each other. i dunno, i'm just not really feelin this joint. i don't really have any suggestions. i think other shit you've done is a lot better.
BigD- interesting. i'm kinda likin it. i think the chops are good, but could have been put together a little better in parts. that part between 10-15 seconds sounds real nice and i'd like to hear more of that. but it sounds too empty when you drop out all those slices for so long. the percussion is good. i'm feelin that. i'm likin that part at 40 seconds. this fits much more nicely. this is much better. got a little layering which adds some depth. that's good. there's some parts that i'm really feelin, and some other parts i'm not diggin as much. you've got a lot of different sections goin on and each section kinda has a different vibe. some of them i really like but others not so much. basically, i would just go back through, pick out the sections that you like best and that fit together the best and take out the ones that have vibes that don't fit with the rest. you've got some really good ideas in there, you just need to weed out the ones that don't fit and what you'll have left is a really solid piece. i'm really diggin the creativity and all the different melodies and shit you've got going on.
Carpe Diem - aight. the percussion is good. the piece has a real dark vibe. the chops are put together very nicely. for whatever reason i'm not feelin the overall sound of this piece as much, even though it's well put together. i think it's just the vibe, i'm not in the right kind of mood for this piece right now. somethin like that. cuz it's well done, but i'm just not getting into it.
Kaivai : that piano sounds way too raw. it needs some effects on it. i'm likin the bass a lot and the percussion is good. that piano is just way too prominent and like "in your face." you need to back it off some. the samples fit in nicely with the rest of what you have composed, but i'd like to have seen you use more of them. there was so much to work with and you only used a very small amount. the piano melody is good. i like this, but that piano needs some altering. overall it's a good beat but just needs some tweaking
lon chainy : this is real nice. the chops you chose are real nice and i'm feelin them. very nicely put together. the drums work fine with what else you've got going. the bass works too. nothing too complex. the beat is simple, but i like it. nice one. no real suggestions except maybe try to add some change ups in there.
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2Good, both pieces sounded identical to me. i think you uploaded the same track twice.
