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Battle Points: 9
Love what you're doing! Not been Belgium but its on the to do list.
I think the beat is a bit basic / repetitive. Main thing is the high pitch of the violin. It should be more of a hook piece or at least ducking in and out. Need to drop that and have some warmer tones come in I think. It sounds rigid too. Needs a little swing for me. Definitely think the bear as a whole world improve from a better mix. Some light reverb and some delay here and there just to break up the rigidness.
I think the beat is a bit basic / repetitive. Main thing is the high pitch of the violin. It should be more of a hook piece or at least ducking in and out. Need to drop that and have some warmer tones come in I think. It sounds rigid too. Needs a little swing for me. Definitely think the bear as a whole world improve from a better mix. Some light reverb and some delay here and there just to break up the rigidness.
StoneLockProd
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Battle Points: 34
It’s a sick sample. I agree that it’s repetitive at a point. Try to get some more out….. oh okay. You do just as I was saying that.
This feels like shit I used to make. And I have the same criticism that I dealt with..
With these type of sample beats when you have a very short repetitive bar you need to really have more variation. The 3 beats same and 4th beat changes is fine. But when you then have that whole bar also be repeated a bunch before changing up the song pattern it becomes too much. I hear basically 2 patterns. And both of those patterns consist of many of the same elements within the beat.
The drums I didn’t pay attention much too.but they seemed to keep it more interesting.
Other thing is it felt like some of the chops during the hook or later on were not lining up well and you’d get bleed from the next beat slice/chop. Idk how you recorded or what. But if your playing or anything is doing that…. Utilize your time stretch or adjust /quantize… whatever it takes
This feels like shit I used to make. And I have the same criticism that I dealt with..
With these type of sample beats when you have a very short repetitive bar you need to really have more variation. The 3 beats same and 4th beat changes is fine. But when you then have that whole bar also be repeated a bunch before changing up the song pattern it becomes too much. I hear basically 2 patterns. And both of those patterns consist of many of the same elements within the beat.
The drums I didn’t pay attention much too.but they seemed to keep it more interesting.
Other thing is it felt like some of the chops during the hook or later on were not lining up well and you’d get bleed from the next beat slice/chop. Idk how you recorded or what. But if your playing or anything is doing that…. Utilize your time stretch or adjust /quantize… whatever it takes