Other than the screw'd vox I wouldn't say the beat is "Texas Style". They go harder with the choice of sounds and synth. In my opinion your synth choice is thin and not in the right key. Synth sounds are video gamish sounding to me. Drums are cool though....
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Other than the screw'd vox I wouldn't say the beat is "Texas Style". They go harder with the choice of sounds and synth. In my opinion your synth choice is thin and not in the right key. Synth sounds are video gamish sounding to me. Drums are cool though....
UNORTHODOX
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Iron: My bad, my internet went out when I got off of here, question.
Whats your listening environment like?
How often are you working on tracks? Daily, weekly etc
BBWolf: I agree with LDB, this sounds like a carnival or video game track. Something is seriously off key here. Study some theory, the answer is there
Whats your listening environment like?
How often are you working on tracks? Daily, weekly etc
BBWolf: I agree with LDB, this sounds like a carnival or video game track. Something is seriously off key here. Study some theory, the answer is there
Ia all good, bruh, technology can (and will) be a motherfucker.
Several days a week.
Listening environment not the best, bedroom style. But I have decent monitors. I shouldn't have much reflections as I have ceiling to floor curtains behind me and tho the side.
Not optimal still, but could be a lot worse.
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If you can, check my beats out. I have a club beat, a street beat, and an amateur beat.
Worth listening too.
Thanks.
http://www.youtube.com/user/EbssOfficial?feature=mhee
Worth listening too.
Thanks.
http://www.youtube.com/user/EbssOfficial?feature=mhee
UNORTHODOX
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Gladly, but you got to post feedback on those before you first
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Big Bad Wolf: Reminds me of my old Sega Genesis... the whole thing was a bit offkey.
DJ Caliber: I checked the Street beat , you need to work on the mix and composition. The keys are atrocious; bass is slightly distorted sorry. What are your main sound sources?
DJ Caliber: I checked the Street beat , you need to work on the mix and composition. The keys are atrocious; bass is slightly distorted sorry. What are your main sound sources?
Big Bad Wolf
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ill o.g.
wat sounds off key to y'all? and i actually am takin a music theory class at my university lol. i appreciate tha constructive criticism guys
Everything BUT the drum pattern and the vox. The synth are clashing big time. Not pleasing to the ears at all homie. I mean...what notes did u use for the synth part...maybe we should start there.
What he said times 10....
Big Bad Wolf
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ill o.g.
ah i gotchu i did have alot of strings goin on in tha background im startin to learn more and more as far as instruments go less is def more jus gotta have everythin flowin together
Big Bad Wolf
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ill o.g.
oh and y'all might think this is a retarded question but as far as keepin everythin in key should every melody that gets played should that start off as the same key as the main melody or can i use diff melodys?
Exactly! Build it up BIG, then sit back, listen, and start stripin' things away.
And it's not that perse....u just have to follow the rules as far as what note in what key can go with what you have....IF IT DON'T FIT DON'T FORCE IT
Make the circle of 5ths your best friend...can't go wrong if u do
Big Bad Wolf
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ill o.g.
ok thanks man. and if u wanna check out anymore of my stuff www.bigbadwolfproduction.com
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