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ABSEED

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Here is a track I recently made. It's named after the part of San Diego I live in.



Nice beat man made my head bounce, but I think the kick and the snare has to be much more thicker.

What do u guys think about this one?
 

Spiegel

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some really nive vibes in this thread. Here is mine...



I really like the vibe of it all, I just feel that the sample you use gets really repetitive after the first couple of bars. You should add some more parts from that sample to form a more complete beat. Repetition is good but it still needs to be interesting.

To kick it off new joint i got.


I really fucking dig this man. I feel like you should modulate that main synth that leads at the drop a little bit more in a rhythmic way. I feel like that would give it more depth. Also a little bit of twitch in the drums would make this track a monster.

Here's my most recent beat...

 
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PhDBeats

Dr. Boom Bap
@PhDBeats I like your boom bap beat man, nice old school vibes! But in my opinion you could add a bass line.

I agree on that although I couldn't get a good sounding one when I experimented. I am not a huge fan of baselines, but I do understand their importance in hiphop. They are kind of deceiving, but when you hear them, you understand how much of an integral part they are.
 
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