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If anyone could help me with feedback or promote this to some people who would like it i would be grateful.
Showcase - July 17-23, 2017
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If anyone could help me with feedback or promote this to some people who would like it i would be grateful.
tomkillsjerry
ILLIEN
heres the whole beat I made for beat this
@tomkillsjerry That beat is dope. You brought that fire as usual. Nothing bad to say.
@S3oulC1ty Once again another banger. That baseline and drums are pure fire.
@Drago Zetić I finally listened to it and the melody and base is dope, but just like Matt says the drums are kinda weak. But other than that, the beat is sauce..
@S3oulC1ty Once again another banger. That baseline and drums are pure fire.
@Drago Zetić I finally listened to it and the melody and base is dope, but just like Matt says the drums are kinda weak. But other than that, the beat is sauce..
Sole Element
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
@tomkillsjerry good solid beat! I especially love the bassline.
@S3oulC1ty Nice groove and the drums hit just right. Everything blends together well and flows good. Two thumbs up.
@S3oulC1ty Nice groove and the drums hit just right. Everything blends together well and flows good. Two thumbs up.
Kod4R
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 19
@Mycelial_Cords i like that beat bro.. great vibez there 
@Klypse great one! i love that sample!
@Drago Zetić great remix bro! keep up the good work!
@S3oulC1ty the best beat on this showcase!
Here is my newest work! I hope you'll like it!
@Klypse great one! i love that sample!
@Drago Zetić great remix bro! keep up the good work!
@S3oulC1ty the best beat on this showcase!
Here is my newest work! I hope you'll like it!
Drago Zetić
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 104
@Kod4R The sample is really nice, but the drums (I assume those are yours) could be louder.
@tomkillsjerry "Step Back" has an overly loud kick during the "verse" part. I think it sounds better if it was low-passed. The rest of the track bangs.
@tomkillsjerry "Step Back" has an overly loud kick during the "verse" part. I think it sounds better if it was low-passed. The rest of the track bangs.
SPmusic Really digging the smooth vibes you have going here, Smooth transitions and great melody. Drums are nice maybe make the kick hit just a bit harder.
LNZN Beats Damn loving the hihats in this one clashes perfectly wit the snare. Great prof mixing. no complaing honestly keep it up
tomkillsjerry DOPE great choice of instruments on this type beat. Really digging the switch up there midway and then when it drops again. Keep it up!
Here is one of my latest, still fairly new to production been doing it for a bout 1-2 months.
LNZN Beats Damn loving the hihats in this one clashes perfectly wit the snare. Great prof mixing. no complaing honestly keep it up
tomkillsjerry DOPE great choice of instruments on this type beat. Really digging the switch up there midway and then when it drops again. Keep it up!
Here is one of my latest, still fairly new to production been doing it for a bout 1-2 months.
BeatsByBlack
Member
Battle Points: 13
Drago Zetić
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 104
@braindead Started out interesting (decent sample choice), but this intentional distortion is bugging me. I get that you're going for the lo-fi style but this is overly exaggerated. Aside from that, it's good.
As for the others, I'm waiting for you guys to give some feedback to the previous posters.
As for the others, I'm waiting for you guys to give some feedback to the previous posters.
csbr
Gardener
Battle Points: 11
My latest track.. An MLK Tribute.. Has a boom-bappy type of feel (Or not, I'm not sure.. don't do much boom bap).. with chill ambient soundscapes etc.. and a switch up at the end..
Showcase:
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Feedback appreciated and returned with substance.
Will be adding feedback to others soon.
Thanks..
Showcase:
[soundcloud]
Feedback appreciated and returned with substance.
Will be adding feedback to others soon.
Thanks..
csbr
Gardener
Battle Points: 11
@BeatsByBlack I love the feeling of this track.. The sound design.. That bass bangs bro.. Overall liked the track a lot, a bit repetitive but being only a minute I'm guessing it's more of a like a samples and if you wanted to stretch it you could add switch-ups etc..
@braindead I like the samples as well (as the previous feedbacker had stated), however I think the case here is of over-compression (and perhaps other overly done processing).. I had a feeling this might be the case even before clicking play as you can see the wave form is almost stuck at the top the entire time with very little dynamic range.. Where it can be good, sometimes, to squeeze as much dB as you can out of our work, this can also cause plenty of distortion if not done with care.. Considering you are so early into production I'm guessing this is the case. Either way,
Back to the other feedback: I liked the sample, I liked the keys, though they could have been a lot louder in relation to the rest of the track so the listener could hear them a little more and not get buried, you sunk in the drums well.. though I think the compression thing is getting me a bit because it's hard to enjoy the song to the fullest with all the distortion! Hope this helps though! Production is a journey..
@Kod4R I liked that sample.. I liked the transition into the drums.. I thought the drums fit well in my opinion if you weren't going for an in your face type of feel.. this has a great laid back feel to it.. Honestly at around or over the half way mark I kind of spaced out and this was a nice little backing track to my conversations and day dreams.. Nice track.
@tomkillsjerry Step Back.. I thought the name fit the vibe very well.. Loved that bassline that came in (where I commented).. The melody you ride throughout I wasn't completely vibing with but I loved some of the effects (like the one that sounds llike a string breaking), the drums, and bass.. Your production output is crazy too bro.. I feel like I see you uploading a track a day at least...
Just working backwards...
@braindead I like the samples as well (as the previous feedbacker had stated), however I think the case here is of over-compression (and perhaps other overly done processing).. I had a feeling this might be the case even before clicking play as you can see the wave form is almost stuck at the top the entire time with very little dynamic range.. Where it can be good, sometimes, to squeeze as much dB as you can out of our work, this can also cause plenty of distortion if not done with care.. Considering you are so early into production I'm guessing this is the case. Either way,
Back to the other feedback: I liked the sample, I liked the keys, though they could have been a lot louder in relation to the rest of the track so the listener could hear them a little more and not get buried, you sunk in the drums well.. though I think the compression thing is getting me a bit because it's hard to enjoy the song to the fullest with all the distortion!
Hope this helps though! Production is a journey..@Kod4R I liked that sample.. I liked the transition into the drums.. I thought the drums fit well in my opinion if you weren't going for an in your face type of feel.. this has a great laid back feel to it.. Honestly at around or over the half way mark I kind of spaced out and this was a nice little backing track to my conversations and day dreams.. Nice track.
@tomkillsjerry Step Back.. I thought the name fit the vibe very well.. Loved that bassline that came in (where I commented).. The melody you ride throughout I wasn't completely vibing with but I loved some of the effects (like the one that sounds llike a string breaking), the drums, and bass.. Your production output is crazy too bro.. I feel like I see you uploading a track a day at least...
Just working backwards...
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