Showcase - February 14 - 20, 2022

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Kane the MOD

Grey haired Boom Bap Rap Dad
Battle Points: 6
@MR. MINESTATE Damn man. These are hard.
First one: I really enjoyed this man. I love how you sparingly used the bass line. There is a lot of empty space in the low end, which allows the kick and lower textures of the instruments to come through. Exceptional work. No criticisms/feedback on this one partner.
Second one: This one is also very good. I think it was a little repetitive and could maybe use more melodic changes to be more viable as an instrumental. However, I think this would be perfect for a rapper. Very nice job man!

@hosie Very nice job on this one brother. I love the swing of the drums. and the cadence of the melodic elements. Also, the scratches and sfx are really nice man. One opinion on the mixing is I feel like the vocals were a tad too loud because of the way they are processed. They cut through very much. I would say maybe a few percent down would be nice for my taste. Honestly, really great job!

@C12omega This is sick, I like the sound selection on this. on the drums and 808s. One feedback would be that the synth at :41 sounds really generic, the melody is nice, just the sound of it seems stock. Other than that, great job man.

@Kane the MOD Great job man. Very interesting sounds and melodies here man. One mixing feedback I have is that I sense some inconsistency in the perceived volume of certain instruments through the track. For instance, at 1:40, you pull in the high end of the piano chords, which make them sound way louder. On certain output devices, that sudden volume change can be unsettling. So I would recommend leveling the volume of the piano DOWN as the frequencies come back in. Other than that, really awesome job on this man. I enjoyed it!
Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated. I can definitely improve my mixing skills.
 
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