Showcase - December 8-10, 2011

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Post your beats! And please provide feedback.

*Remember: Give feedback, then post your beat.

 

[thedreampolice]

Ok here is one more hip hopish track. Remember to listen through the chorus. Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/drunk-pedestrians/memories-of-yesteryear

 

[Swift]

thedreampolice - real laid back groove, i could sit back and just chill to this. i like it man nice work.


Heres one i made the other day

http://soundcloud.com/swiftflowbeats/concrete-jungle

 

[JustRipe]

@ dp- dope, love the samples and the bass, nice HIPHOP joint lol. loved the horn sound that comes in too.
@ swift(ricky) u know what i thinkks.






i made 4 new beats the other day listen to whichever ones u have time for dont matter to me as long as i get some kinda feedback on anything lol..


http://soundcloud.com/jus-ripe/manifest
http://soundcloud.com/jus-ripe/desert-like-tracks
http://soundcloud.com/jus-ripe/equinox
http://soundcloud.com/jus-ripe/mind-snatchin

 

[Lil Dude]

Beats

How do i send feedback to other ppl beats when i go on there page there are no beats there.......Also i hope my beats fit your criteria i hear a lot of hip hop tracks.

 

[thedreampolice]

@Swift I like allot, I think I would change the mix a bit, maybe eq the bass line a little but I like this. Nice!

@Justripe, my track is 100% composed. But thanks! That is a huge compliment

ok, I like Manifest, but it feels like it needs almost a little more direction? Idk maybe build a verse, chorus, verse chorus structure. IDK I will listen to more as I have time.

@dnyb this is a hip-hop site, so that is what you will hear the most of, and you just post feedback in this thread, and Welcome!

 

[JustRipe]

@ dp, it does have the structure somewhat, its just not so built up, if an emcee was on it you would probably be able to tell more, and dam, mad respects for composing that haha coulda fooled me. im trying to get into composing my own basslines someone told me about a program called melodyne that can help me to do so, do u have any tips? do u think i need a program or should just do it by ear along with the samples?

 

[Padrino Stackz]

i have 3 that need some feed back. (much appreciated in advance!)

"Freestyle Friday" http://soundcloud.com/padrinostackz/freestyle-friday
"Everything" http://soundcloud.com/padrinostackz/everything
"Padrino's Way" http://soundcloud.com/padrinostackz/padrinos-way (i put this one up the last showcase but still looking for more feedback if possible)


FEEDBACKS


dP... you delivered on this one buddy! Phenominal! everything is on point!

Swift.. like i said on your page... this is extra cold! i like how the bass fades in at the beginning.. might have to borrow that someday! lol


jus-ripe.. "Manifest" sick effects on the sample.. nice choice of samples
"desert-like-tracks" the piano is extra cold! im a bit hesitant to make a piano driven beat these days... but you came through!
"equinox" you used that effect again.. feeling it.. street story joint!
"mind snatching" on the mellow side... i like the change up with the "beat box" sample

overall... you got some heat on your hands!

 

[HipKnokerZ]

Some feedback....

for yall!!!

Padrino
Freestyle- I like the feel of it, but as other's said, bass needs to be mixed more cleanly, got some mud there.

Everything- whoa, dopeness, I hope I can get to that level, wow.

Padrinos way-I admire how you have all these sounds going on, and it still sounds clean. good work

Just Ripe
Manifest- I am a sucker for story telling beats, makes me think that real hip hop can still make a comeback, leaves great room for the lyricist. Em would merck this openly.

Desert Tracks - Same as above, love how you panned the different keys, and made them sound like if they were recorded through the phone or something.

Equinox- like how the keys and vibes give it a lofty touch. YOu EQ the mess out of them dont you?

Swift
Concrete Jungle- I hear EQ being used on this track too right? Wow, I love this type of sound of HipHop, I miss it in music today.

Drunk P
YesterYear- Like the bass line, this doesn't sound sampled, am I right? Sounds good as a composition. I do alot of original works as well. Like the jazz feel with sax sounding thing. Chill bro, nice.



Well, here is my track, did it kind of quick, so kind of left it repetitive, kind of like 6'7'

http://snd.sc/uOKiOT

This track is coming out on an EP next year.

http://snd.sc/syBvrs

This is for anyone from MIAMI!!

http://snd.sc/tTWv0X


Thanks in advance for the help!

Jayson

 

[Padrino Stackz]

HipKnockerz - "only you" this is straight heat man. especially for a quick flip. im about to get with the dirty souf style because i dont wanna put myself in a "box" as a NY boom bap beatmaker... question.. is the tempo around 125 bpm?

"hcAnth" this goes HARD! crazy work right here bro bro!. im guessing you are using a keyboard?

solid work all around!

 

[HipKnokerZ]

Yeah, its around there if I remember. And yes, I do use a keyboard. Thanks for the comments, it's nice to hear other beatmaker's opinion on my craft. I hardly like what I make, think I am too hard on myself. Peace

 

[JustRipe]

thanks you guys.

@ padrino- freestyle friday- mad sick as hell, love the kick goes so good with the bass, love the horns also. dope beat props.
everything- sick ass violin sample i love high pitch notes like that, the vocal sounds dope too, and that piano sample or whatever it is is awsome. killin it.
padrinos way- great intro, dam the drums come in FIRE soooo dope, fav out of them all, great sample.

@ hipknokerz- loved the intro was so dope like that sample, as it came in it kinda got annoying, i dont like the clap, and the bass seems kinda just like ur average vst "boom", but doesnt sound bad if u like a hard hitting beat. nice work.

 

[Lil Dude]

Yo

Yo good looking and taking time and listening to the beat and selecting it. It's Danny B lol. Good comp. good show. cool dude. More to come.

 

[Relic]

DP- Thank god you started studying this stuff! lol, for real though this is soooo much more on track than back in the long before time. Good job, nothing wrong with this. Sounds like there is some Stress/Ex influence in there.

 

[Swift]

JusRipe -

you already know what i think man


Padrino Stackz -

Freestyle Friday - loving these sounds, i like the texture of this beat.

EVERYTHING - Again with this one i love the samples you're using.

Padrino's Way - already hit that up last showcase.


HipKnokerZ -

OnlyYou - Wasnt feeling that clap too much, and maybe if you added some more sounds and gave it some better structure.

HCAnth1 - This ones tight.



Thanks for the feedback everybody!!!