Showcase - August 30-September 5, 2021

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Sole Element

ILLIEN
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@Ys Man this is cold! Your beats are consistent and mixes are clean. Bout to follow your page, but do you have YouTube? I check out stuff on YouTube more frequently
 

nikwen

ILLIEN
Here is another one I made, not much variation but that’s how I like certain beats


Love how you build the whole beat on top of that vocal sample. A really good one, too, and it's easier to rap to than I thought.

The break at 0:22 felt a bit weird. Super unexpected, but maybe it could sound great in a song. Was surprising again when it reappeared later. Keep in mind, I was freestyling, so everything was spontaneous.

When there was no break, this was fun, though. Expected it to be hard to rap to but it really wasn't. The drums are an awesome foundation and the vocal sample blends great with your own voice when you're rapping.

Keep it up, man! (y)
 

Ys Man

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 21
Good job! I like that the violin is a bit dissonant. The fact that the beat always hits very hard on 1 really helps with rapping.
Would have loved to see more variations overall, especially in melody.
thanks i agree im more of a sampler and not too good at instumentation
@Ys Man this is cold! Your beats are consistent and mixes are clean. Bout to follow your page, but do you have YouTube? I check out stuff on YouTube more frequently
thanks i dont have a youtube yet i should make one.

Here is another one I made, not much variation but that’s how I like certain beats


the chops on this are perfect, the sample could do with some eq to bring out the toms and bass(possibly double and filter for the bass) only thing im not feeling is the snare
 

Sole Element

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
@Ys Man yeah I thought about bringing the bass up some but for some reason I didn’t want it up very high so I left it but it probably would sound better with it up. Unfortunately my computer crashed so I’m trying to retrieve everything off my hard drive to get my older stuff back smh. But I love my snare lol
 

Ys Man

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 21
@Ys Man yeah I thought about bringing the bass up some but for some reason I didn’t want it up very high so I left it but it probably would sound better with it up. Unfortunately my computer crashed so I’m trying to retrieve everything off my hard drive to get my older stuff back smh. But I love my snare lol
Haha its not bad and would probably grow but threw me off a bit
 
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TjombaBeats

Mister Miyagi Beats
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 170
Hey ladies and gents.

I just made this piece. Kinda Mellow Vintage beat i guess i like the bass tune it's catchy. The intro gives that mellow trippy feeling. The bastune kicks in on a right moment in the right place. Made it short so i could throw everything i got in it lol. Naahhh just joking it's a stable beat in my opinion. But how about you ladies and gents ? You think this beat fits your street tell me. Enjoy and thanks for your time

(ill be around in my little cellar)

 
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TjombaBeats

Mister Miyagi Beats
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 170


a work in progress, and feedback wiil be reciprocated,

Yoo this is already ready for a spit yoo. I like it like the basstune. The beat is fat in your face kinda i like that maybe some more variation would be nice make things spicy.
Here is another one I made, not much variation but that’s how I like certain beats



I like the sampling you've done with this one kinda chill out beat. Kinda type beat i would bounce with going to the casino hehehe anyway good job !
 
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nikwen

ILLIEN
Hey ladies and gents.

I just made this piece. Kinda Mellow Vintage beat i guess i like the bass tune it's catchy. The intro gives that mellow trippy feeling. The bastune kicks in on a right moment in the right place. Made it short so i could throw everything i got in it lol. Naahhh just joking it's a stable beat in my opinion. But how about you ladies and gents ? You think this beat fits your street tell me. Enjoy and thanks for your time

(ill be around in my little cellar)


Cool one! A bit unusual but that's always interesting.

I freestyled to this and in the beginning I was a bit confused how to do that because the beat was so unconventional but at some point it got easier. [Hell, I'm not even sure if this beat was intended to be a rap beat.]
What I really liked while rapping was the great support from the low-frequency synth sounds. They really helped with keeping a steady flow by providing something like a rhythmical reference.
When they dropped at around 1:40, it gave me more freedom to do different stuff with my voice and the beat got more chill overall.
I liked both parts, though.

Keep it up!
 

TWU

The.Widely.Unknown


working on a new one

Dope...
I really like the part between the verses. Vocals fit the beat. Sample is also :fire:.

Was listening to some of your other stuff on SC and must say the recent ones are all pretty dope. I can definitely hear you made huge progress (comparing it to your older uploads). Do you use drum loops?

If you didn't already you should really enter some beat battles here! (It's surprisingly balanced between trap & boombap and so are the votes.) Quite often it's theme based and it really challenges you to be even more creative with samples...
 

Sole Element

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 1
@TjombaBeats love the casino reference lol. Checked out your track, It's very well put together and all that good stuff but it was just a bit too different for my taste. I can tell it's a well put together track just not as good as your earlier stuff from last showcase IMO.
@Ys Man that remix is on point! The vocals fit nicely. You've got that classic hip hop style down!! I went ahead and turned the bass up definetely helped than I added 50 Cent Vocals because the sample went pretty good with the lyrics. I can't quite edit the way I want to until I get my stuff recovered so I had to try adjusting the whole track at once.

 

Ys Man

ILLIEN
Battle Points: 21
Hey ladies and gents.

I just made this piece. Kinda Mellow Vintage beat i guess i like the bass tune it's catchy. The intro gives that mellow trippy feeling. The bastune kicks in on a right moment in the right place. Made it short so i could throw everything i got in it lol. Naahhh just joking it's a stable beat in my opinion. But how about you ladies and gents ? You think this beat fits your street tell me. Enjoy and thanks for your time

(ill be around in my little cellar)


Youve got your own style thats for sure! i would of prefered this if you stayed with the breakbeat\trip hop drums over the switch to more rap drums

@TjombaBeats love the casino reference lol. Checked out your track, It's very well put together and all that good stuff but it was just a bit too different for my taste. I can tell it's a well put together track just not as good as your earlier stuff from last showcase IMO.
@Ys Man that remix is on point! The vocals fit nicely. You've got that classic hip hop style down!! I went ahead and turned the bass up definetely helped than I added 50 Cent Vocals because the sample went pretty good with the lyrics. I can't quite edit the way I want to until I get my stuff recovered so I had to try adjusting the whole track at once.


sounds better on the lows but its very muddy and the strings are away now, the vocals dont fit for me.


everythings done well, but not something id listen to though
 
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