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Ys Man

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Sampled some classical this week. Thanks in advance for all feedback. i'll return the favor later in the week.


some good ideas but too much going on, the whine noise doesnt really fit for me either keep it raw. For me all you need is this one loop and variation in drums and cuts, less is more


will provide feedback later today!




for the first one (Logic) the mix is letting it down and seems like the beat and acapella are 2 different ideas, 2nd one (Mariah) again the mix lets it down and the beat doesnt ride well with the vocals for me. G-Unit too choppy on the vocals in the sample for my preference and agin the mix isnt the best, definately some good ideas but need to work on the mix.

Caught a Legend of Zelda vibe:

Mix and everything sounds good here, not my kind of thing but see what you have done vocals could light it up and maybe give some ideas for more elements

@Rah.sool i love the build up on this!! The part that really sticks out is that snare roll you added that was lit.
I made this one yesterday

Interesting, trip hop vibes, could do with some bass i think, sounds like something i would hear on the radio which is a good thing

Made a little something for you guys to check out ! Drop a comment like it only if you do dig the tune ofcourse. Also im having a bit of trouble with internet today i will reply to the others later.


Its out there and different, good stuff some more width in the mix of the instruments could add a bit of depth as it all sounds a bit mono maybe some movement across the sides and single out the sounds a bit more the drums overtake everything


nice the sample needs bringing out more as the drums level is way higher so it doesnt sound full at all, i would change or remove the strings if possible they sound too "floaty" and not authentic enough personally, also a shorter hat maybe or quieter it sort of takes over, the sample work and idea is good though i like it
 

deanscott

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I am taking a break from making music and I've put together what I've got so far since I started last year. I know production isn't good and it is unfinished for the most part but what do you think about overall feel of it?

 
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@TjombaBeats great arrangement my man!! That’s very cool and cinematic!!

@Ys Man man all those are clean. That second one is my favorite! I’m a huge pac fan, but that second melody was it for me

@deanscott that sounded good to me!! I didn’t hear anything wrong with the piece I checked out it’s dope!!
 
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