Demos for album I'm producing... tell me which are TRASH!

[Flip G]

 

[TWU]

Listening to this i've noticed a couple of things. (Please consider this as constructive feedback.)

The singing on Pleasing U is out of tune and on several other tracks the autotune is just a little too present.
The sound of your voice is really suitable for singing, but I think you have to invest more time in lessons/practice if i'm honest.

The beats sound good, maybe some of them lack a little warmth/saturation to create that rich sound if you get what I mean.

Keep it up!

 

[Flip G]

This is exactly what I was looking for! And you are spot on sir!... I think standing up is better for vocals, recording the final vocals very soon... I would love to stay in touch!

 

[DPrezd Beggar]

I think standing up is better for vocals

Are you recording while sitting? This compresses your upper body, you can store less air and your voice wont sound full that way.
Do some streching to get your body all relaxed and try recording again whike standing upright, you ll notice the difference right away.

 

[Iron Keys]

Not listened to them all. Really liking 'Feeling Creative' as a vibe. Really good songwriting in terms of topline melody and arrangement.

One thing I feel a bit, generally, is lyrics could maybe do with refining. Quite a few instances where it felt like what was being said was pretty random or did not connect with great with the previous line etc. And some phrases felt grammatically odd, a bit like you wanted to drop some phrase, but couldn't make it fit, so changed tense, or words to make it work musically.

I've had that before where it's a struggle to make what you want to say fit. Sometimes you have to sacrifice and say something else.

I'm also liking 'Sleep' seems a vibe.

 

[Flip G]

Are you recording while sitting? This compresses your upper body, you can store less air and your voice wont sound full that way.
Do some streching to get your body all relaxed and try recording again whike standing upright, you ll notice the difference right away.

This right here.... lol