ProPortionMusic
Beatmaker
Battle Points: 1
Rampage
Dark Trap Beat || "Rampage"
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Very cool 
Nice drum pattern, mix is alright in my opinion and it's nice that you tried to play with arrangement here. I mean removing some elements like drums completely and adding some subtle changes. It's a really good approach that I often recommend.
If you're 15 years old then I think you're doing a great job and I'm curious what you will be capable of making let's say in the next 5 years or something. The only thing I didn't like was sound choice for the main melody as those synths sound pretty generic. Other than this beat is alright.
Nice drum pattern, mix is alright in my opinion and it's nice that you tried to play with arrangement here. I mean removing some elements like drums completely and adding some subtle changes. It's a really good approach that I often recommend.If you're 15 years old then I think you're doing a great job and I'm curious what you will be capable of making let's say in the next 5 years or something. The only thing I didn't like was sound choice for the main melody as those synths sound pretty generic. Other than this beat is alright.
ProPortionMusic
Beatmaker
Battle Points: 1
Thanks! This was my second beat I've ever made and it's my second most viewed song on YouTube. I also posted it on ClassE Beats' Song Of The Night contest and everyone in the chat loved it. I didn't win though XD
I like the beat, it shows a good grasp of the basics. It progresses nicely, changes up and stays interesting. The drums are interesting. If this is just your second beat then I am impressed. What DAW are you using?
ProPortionMusic
Beatmaker
Battle Points: 1
I use both Soundtrap and Bandlab. Considering that I'm only 15, I have limited platforms to use. I have a class at my high school that lets me use something called Adobe Audition CC and it's really advanced and that's going to be my main DAW when I graduate.
Dusty B
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 37
Great work here. My $0.02 would be to add a little bit of reverb/delay to the melody, I think it'll help give it more of a feeling like it has its own space vs. sounding a bit "systemic." The 808 roll is cool.
p.s. if you're looking for a free feature-full DAW, check out LMMS.
p.s. if you're looking for a free feature-full DAW, check out LMMS.
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
Good work @ProPortionMusic! I like the overall vibe here and very impressive if this was your 2nd beat ever made.
Nice.
Nice.
