Afu-Ra & Gentleman - Why Cry (JustIn Flow Remix)

[JustIn Flow]

Take a listen, feel free to give feedback and what you like and don't like.

JustIn Flow - "Afu-Ra & Gentleman - Why Cry (JustIn Flow Remix) Instrumental"

 

[JustIn Flow]

Here's the complete one with Vocals

 

[InsideOutBeats]

Like this man, drums especially snare could slap more, slightly distant in places. Drum work nice though.
Playing about with the vocal chops nice.

Props going for a drum change up @2.00 but they are well out / badly off which upsets your beat and you do it again shortly after.
Go back and sort those drums and you’ve got a dope beat here man, but they are glaringly off at those parts.

 

[JustIn Flow]

Thank you for listening and the feedback.
Overall, I wasn't completely satisfied with the instrumental and the remix myself, but in the end I left it that way because I already started a new project.
The one with the change should bring in a little Raggae/Dancehall elements. But that hasn't worked out so well yet.
Thank you for your criticism, it's always helpful!

 

[2GooD Productions]

The pella isnt working with the beat IMO, especially on the sung parts. I think the pella is in a different key

 

[JustIn Flow]

The pella isnt working with the beat IMO, especially on the sung parts. I think the pella is in a different key

Yes absolutely, that is probably the main one for the dysharmony. I also noticed that and your confirmation proves it right!

 

[JodyKurtis]

dope!