Definitely feelin it. Not necessarily my style, but I feel it nonetheless. I feel as if its fine by itself really...as 2good said I dont really have any constructive feedback on this...but I hear you on the subtle sounds you throw in there to switch it up slightly. All it really needs is someone who can write/formulate/construct their own song to it. Good shit man, pretty fire.
Bro im a Westcoaster to the heart. Like that Dre sound to, it but i would had a high lead in it somewhere, for a hook or something. But that mug bang, i almost started c-walkin in my office. They would have though i was crazy in here!