From the off sounds distorted, the orchestral stabs are a bit distorted. That synth adds distortion too that sounds a little unpleasant. I think if you controlled some of that distortion, made it a little more pleasant to the ear. The distortion is drawing my ears away from what you are saying and onto the distortion. Use some compression on those orchestral stabs and maybe some saturation for that controlled distortion. You will be able to make the stabs hit hard without going into the red.