BLOW by KHz. (1st Share. Constructive criticism is valued)
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seems to be a lot going on, and its not really working well all together, like @Iron Keys said about the panning, its a bit extreme and off putting tbh. Personally Id drop the vocal because once it goes it doesnt seem like so much is going on.
Maybe even if you just centered the vocal it might not be so disorientating.
Maybe even if you just centered the vocal it might not be so disorientating.
KHz
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@ IronKeys; the panning was a trippy effect i was trying to aim for. @2GooD Productions yea. i just listened to it in my car. i hate the kick especially. i'm more concerned with the low end. i put the vocals there to fit the context of the beat. I'll drop it bc i don't wanna get racked for not clearing a sample.
thanks for the feedback fellas. i'm trying my best to get my beats/mixes up to par with some of the stuff i've heard on here. that's why i joined the group!
thanks for the feedback fellas. i'm trying my best to get my beats/mixes up to par with some of the stuff i've heard on here. that's why i joined the group!
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
Yeah vocals are weak and distant and after they come in the track feels flat.
Just keep at it, uploading and following feedback and you’ll soon see major results.
Just keep at it, uploading and following feedback and you’ll soon see major results.
KHz
Newbie
I sampled the vocals from an old school Memphis rapper so yes, I was aiming for the PHonk vibe. Thanks for catching on to this
I think phonk is the vibe you were goin for fs
I listen to some phonk and thought about messin with it
The beat sound like it can be harder. Them kicks need to be punchin me in the face . Lol
I don’t think the vocals sound bad I wouldn’t have panned em. I listened on my Dre beats headphones and it sounded pretty clean on my end just the kick need to hit
Maybe added some cowbell
I listen to some phonk and thought about messin with it
The beat sound like it can be harder. Them kicks need to be punchin me in the face . Lol
I don’t think the vocals sound bad I wouldn’t have panned em. I listened on my Dre beats headphones and it sounded pretty clean on my end just the kick need to hit
Maybe added some cowbell
This is really weird, I haven't really heard panning like that before. I like it a lot though, I love that bass when it kicks in. The one thing I don't like is I just wish I could hear and understand the lyrics. I know mumble rap exists but I personally couldn't make out a word of it, I heard the word bathroom I think. But the way the vocals are in the track, purely the sound of them, seem perfect to me.
