Showcase SHOWCASE: November 17-24, 2024

iDeaLoGiK

Disservice With a Smile
Battle Points: 58
My recent remix of The Godfathers (Kool G Rap + Necro) 'The City'.


I like the beat. its super ethereal sounding, I'll be damned if it sounds like the opposite of what necro would be on.

I agree with fade, the drums could knock a little harder. I also think the kicks get a bit repetitive. I think the third repeat could be replaced with something else.
I'd also like to see something to elevate the hook portion to go along with the elevated cadence in the vocals.

Otherwise pretty dope beat you got there.

Posted this in the old showcase without the lyric video but got no response, so I'mma post it again. Full song, I did the beat and the vocals. I also made the lyric video, and because its all hand animated it took me north of 30 hours to make and I would rather shoot myself than do it again.
 

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ILLIEN
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Battle Points: 264
I like the beat. its super ethereal sounding, I'll be damned if it sounds like the opposite of what necro would be on.

I agree with fade, the drums could knock a little harder. I also think the kicks get a bit repetitive. I think the third repeat could be replaced with something else.
I'd also like to see something to elevate the hook portion to go along with the elevated cadence in the vocals.

Otherwise pretty dope beat you got there.

Posted this in the old showcase without the lyric video but got no response, so I'mma post it again. Full song, I did the beat and the vocals. I also made the lyric video, and because its all hand animated it took me north of 30 hours to make and I would rather shoot myself than do it again.

Thanks for the feedback @Fade and @iDeaLoGiK .

Cool lyric video. Digging the hard drums and the horns but I think the piano sounds a tad too synthetic vs the rest, perhaps adding some delay might help.
 
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