Patience - "This Is All I Can Say"
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
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Fade out function on DAW wasnt working, so instruments towards the end cut off.... Here's what I got tho
I did more work on this....
I did more work on this....
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Delta Skeltah
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
U definitely made a dope beat with just a few instruments. Good work on this...
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InsideOutBeats
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Mike Chief
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ill o.g.
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@Fyyn3stSymphoni -I can dig the direction, however its too much goin on for my tastes. The samples are clashing quite a bit, in flow and in frequency. Too many thoughts at once imo but keep going.
@Delta_Nine -Shit is clean, and definitely dig the vocal samples in it. Drums are hitting clean, and has a nice amount of grit. Fuckin smooth shit.
@InsideOutBeats -This is a cool flip, I dig it. I wish the kick hit a little harder, and the snare/clap a little less, but this shit is dope man. Nice way to flip it.
Clean find, @Fade this shit is smooth as fuck. Had to hop on this
@Delta_Nine -Shit is clean, and definitely dig the vocal samples in it. Drums are hitting clean, and has a nice amount of grit. Fuckin smooth shit.
@InsideOutBeats -This is a cool flip, I dig it. I wish the kick hit a little harder, and the snare/clap a little less, but this shit is dope man. Nice way to flip it.
Clean find, @Fade this shit is smooth as fuck. Had to hop on this
InsideOutBeats
ILLIEN
@Mike Chief thanks man, yeah I agree on the kick, pretty low in the mix.
Nice work with your flip, smooth through-out, clap sounds dope, real laid back chill vibe to compliment the original samples vibe.
Nice work with your flip, smooth through-out, clap sounds dope, real laid back chill vibe to compliment the original samples vibe.
Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.. I might make a 2nd version of this with less vocal pieces & rearrange some of the instruments.@Fyyn3stSymphoni -I can dig the direction, however its too much goin on for my tastes. The samples are clashing quite a bit, in flow and in frequency. Too many thoughts at once imo but keep going.
@Delta_Nine -Shit is clean, and definitely dig the vocal samples in it. Drums are hitting clean, and has a nice amount of grit. Fuckin smooth shit.
@InsideOutBeats -This is a cool flip, I dig it. I wish the kick hit a little harder, and the snare/clap a little less, but this shit is dope man. Nice way to flip it.
Clean find, @Fade this shit is smooth as fuck. Had to hop on this
Your flip is dope tho. Love the smooth vibe... Nice work
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DJ Excellence
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here is mine
Nice work.here is mine
Mixwise, there's a lot of muffledness in the lows/lowmids. Needs a lot of cleaning up/tightening. Dunno if you added another bass with it, but it's clashing.
Delishsus. Easymoney
Thank you . Yea I heard that too after uploading. Gonna work on my mixing thanks
SHEP
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Battle Points: 2
Loving all the takes on this! source material is very workable.
It's 5am and I have a coach to catch in 7 hours with all my way too much stuff to start my brand new life but I stayed up all night polishing this mess instead of sleeping because I'm a fucking smart responsible grown up like that.
Edit: redacted after listening back and going ugh. An amended version may resurface if it isnt totallly burnt.
It's 5am and I have a coach to catch in 7 hours with all my way too much stuff to start my brand new life but I stayed up all night polishing this mess instead of sleeping because I'm a fucking smart responsible grown up like that.
Nothing here yet.
Edit: redacted after listening back and going ugh. An amended version may resurface if it isnt totallly burnt.
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