Patience - "This Is All I Can Say"

Mike Chief

ILLIEN
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 7
@Fyyn3stSymphoni -I can dig the direction, however its too much goin on for my tastes. The samples are clashing quite a bit, in flow and in frequency. Too many thoughts at once imo but keep going.

@Delta_Nine -Shit is clean, and definitely dig the vocal samples in it. Drums are hitting clean, and has a nice amount of grit. Fuckin smooth shit.

@InsideOutBeats -This is a cool flip, I dig it. I wish the kick hit a little harder, and the snare/clap a little less, but this shit is dope man. Nice way to flip it.

Clean find, @Fade this shit is smooth as fuck. Had to hop on this

 
Battle Points: 42
@Fyyn3stSymphoni -I can dig the direction, however its too much goin on for my tastes. The samples are clashing quite a bit, in flow and in frequency. Too many thoughts at once imo but keep going.

@Delta_Nine -Shit is clean, and definitely dig the vocal samples in it. Drums are hitting clean, and has a nice amount of grit. Fuckin smooth shit.

@InsideOutBeats -This is a cool flip, I dig it. I wish the kick hit a little harder, and the snare/clap a little less, but this shit is dope man. Nice way to flip it.

Clean find, @Fade this shit is smooth as fuck. Had to hop on this

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.. I might make a 2nd version of this with less vocal pieces & rearrange some of the instruments.

Your flip is dope tho. Love the smooth vibe... Nice work
 
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SHEP

Member
Battle Points: 1
Loving all the takes on this! source material is very workable.

It's 5am and I have a coach to catch in 7 hours with all my way too much stuff to start my brand new life but I stayed up all night polishing this mess instead of sleeping because I'm a fucking smart responsible grown up like that.

Nothing here yet.

Edit: redacted after listening back and going ugh. An amended version may resurface if it isnt totallly burnt.
 
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Iron Keys

ILLIEN MBAPPÉ
ill o.g.
Battle Points: 593
Loving all the takes on this! source material is very workable.

It's 5am and I have a coach to catch in 7 hours with all my way too much stuff to start my brand new life but I stayed up all night polishing this mess instead of sleeping because I'm a fucking smart responsible grown up like that.

Nothing here yet.

Edit: redacted after listening back and going ugh. An amended version may resurface if it isnt totallly burnt.
Heart react for the staying up late making beats when got some long day type ish ahead. It is the way of the Iron Keys.
 
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